All Comments on 'No Hands Allowed'

Nice tight flash story

Once again we have a story about people who are afraid to talk to each other about the most important thing in their lives. They make a big deal about "reading" each other when all they have to do is open their mouths and talk. And this big deal of an "inspiration" he gets watching her with the children. Ho hum! It's worth a 3* because it was fairly well written. It's worth a 1* for creativity.

I thought the sex part was too long, but that's just me. Undoubtedly, some readers enjoy reading long-winded carnal encounters. Personally, I would have liked it more had you focused more on the conflict/hesitation, his and hers, regarding the decision to marry. Well written, though, and realistic dialogue.

I'm sure she "shared" her "concerns" with another guy, one more of her social standing. After all, it's like holding in a shit, you can turtle only so long before it all comes out like a black Friday stampede at Wal-Mart.

The story is like it was meant for LW, but her cheating was edited out. It still leaves in many of the formula ingredients for the cuckold formula story.