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Click hereThat summer and fall there were an inordinate number of trees and orchards taken out. Couples walked down the streets of town holding hands and the husbands had smiles of contentment and love on their faces. I spent a weekend at Janice Burrows place taking out those trees I had planted all those years ago. Her grandson Jeff was there to help. She said she hadn't honored Jeff in life, but she "damn sure would honor him in death."
There were a few couples who didn't have their trees taken out. Some of them are now in the midst of divorces. It seems the husbands saw how their friends' and family's wives were honoring them and realized their wives treasured the memories of their trysts more than them.
The most notable divorce was my cousin. It seems his wife was having regular visits from her 23 year old 'student'. It was a bitter divorce. My cousin's wife tried to claim that he was abusing her. He had the house wired for video. It caught her throwing dishes at him and belittling him. It also caught her and her lover on tape. She left the county, shamed and humiliated. My cousin put a beating on the young man one night at the local tavern. No one there stepped in to help the boy. With the help of all our family, my cousin is recovering his self esteem. My dad and I worked along side him when he removed the trees.
Several people, followed the example of my mom and dad and planted evergreens in their yard as an example of their undying love. I found myself wishing I had kept my house so we could plant one. Debbie remedied that the next weekend. While Dad and I were watching a baseball game Debbie and Mom went outside and planted a tree for the two of us. "Come outside, Bill," she said. She showed me our tree. We had a bench made and placed between the trees. It had "Dedicated to the everlasting love between husbands and wives and between fathers, mothers and their children." inscribed on it.
And a new family tradition was born.
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Thank you for reading this, my first submission to Literotica
All comments are welcome. Please vote.
TNOLDGUY
- COMMENTS
InForIt24 days agoNot as well written as the original, but it gives it the ending it deserved.
Not because I like it better (I do), but it is way more inline with the main character developed in the original.
Wargamerabout 2 months agoStill a cuck tale untagged at least have the courage to tag your story, it’s good manners here on Lit.
Scores 1/5
QDStruggle3 months agoInteresting fantasy. This author is a woman, as they typically expect their actions are acceptable (they “control the pussy”) and thus the somewhat happy ending. Problem is Men tend to give everything into their love for their wives. The betrayal is crushing to men. Forgiveness (if remotely possible) takes forever.
Additional thought: If the sexes were somehow reversed (men teaching young women), it would be viewed as fantasy and “not plausible”
PhoenixLore19814 months agoHow do you figure they regained there respect and dignity they let there wives fuck around on them they didn't regain their respect and dignity they lost all respect not just from there wives but from everyone else in the world including kids they can never regain that the husbands and the wives all deserve to die the husbands should kill themselves now cause there not going to like life now there going to get disrespected at every turn from everyone and then there going to get there ass beat by every MAN out there at every turn ask any willing cuck bitch out there they will tell you nobody not even kids respect them that they get there ass beat every time they leave the house they have to live like a recluse for being a willing cuck bitch which is why in real life you hardly ever hear about willing cuck bitches cause they know they will disrespected by everyone and get there ass kicked at every turn and not even the law will do anything to help them that's the price you pay for being something that god did not create man to be that's assuming they even survive most willing cuck bitches wouldn't survive they would be killed like they deserve and the cheating sluts would also be killed like they deserve
RePhil4 months agoNice spin!! You nearly pulled it off. Many nice words and pleasantries for everyone but the victims. Everyone has their own reality and no one should ever think that others would accept or rejoice in their personal reality or hell as the case may be. Sometimes it’s better to be a widower rather than a Divorcee
Anonymous4 months agoNot a bad alternative. Comes off as less betrayal than in GA alternative where her reasons are different. To be fair the MC here brings up a good point. She did ask him and he did not reply. Still rough, but not as harsh as GA versions, where she would have done it anyways and she said some things that would effectively kill the marriage. 4 stars as I doubt the other marriages would suddenly heal because trees were removed after so many years of pain.
Anonymous5 months agoThis was a big no-no. Telling us we have to find somebody else's story without a link. Another way you can do it is to start with a summary. For that reason I am not bothering with your story. I am tempted to score it one star, but that would be wrong. No read, no score.
Try to learn from this.
JPB
PhoenixLore19815 months agoThis is my second comment on this and I'm going to address the tag line of the story a man can never regain respect when he knew and let his wife fuck another man no man would ever respect him and no woman would either he completely lost all respect it can never be earned again even kids will show him disrespect now he killed every credibility he ever had when he allowed her to fuck another man even when she told him what she was going to do he allowed her to do it and get away with it he just became 1 of the lowest scums on earth not the lowest the scum on earth that title belongs to child molesters but the 2nd lowest scum on earth belongs to a true cuckold those that allow and or let there wife get away with cheating which is what this husband is a true cuckold the 2nd lowest scum on earth he needs to go prison where those in for life make him there bitch like the bitch he is then they would kill him cause inmates don't take kindly to child molesters and cuck bitches which is why those types of people never survive not in prison nor in life so not only did the husband just lose all respect from everyone including kids they signed there own death warrant and when a writer writes stories like this they lose a lot of respect not all but a lot cause it shows they would more than likely allow there wife to get away with cheating on them and you can't trust nor respect someone that would allow that just like you can't trust nor respect someone who would cheat
PhoenixLore19818 months agoInteresting ordeal some would say he is a better man others would say he is cuck bitch/coward I fall under the later she would have been out the door and I would have completely disowned everyone that was a part of it and would have beat the shit out of the guy
bigurn8 months agoSorry to say that, this is a piece of crap story about a bunch of cheating piece of crap women and the punk ass guys that stayed with their betraying, slut asses ...
Anonymous10 months agoIt's not enough that you're a cuck, you're a liar as well!
Where's the dignity in being cucked and a knowing cuckold? Where's the dignity in being with a slutwife? Where's the respect in getting sloppy seconds?
