All Comments on 'Nocturnal Emissions Ch. 02'

Another great chapter in a compelling story of pure love! I'm still amazed at their expressions of affection, the careful approach, the sensual way of making love and deep care for each other.

But as good and sweet as this is I knew it's too good to be left alone by the author so the added drama didn't caught me off guard too much. Then again it was very nice to see them staying true to their loves no matter the Nick and the predicament they found themselves in. The father issue though is another thing in its own right, just what will josh do and who he'll tell now that he found out. Maybe trail him and then let the mom on the secret...guess we'll so how you decide to do this.

Once more I gave you 5* as I really liked it yet hope you won't let the drama to destroy this nice scene you put up.

It was nice until -- the ending sucked.