All Comments on 'Not a Stalker Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

The rape outcome was certainly unexpected, just not sure that it was that erotic. Worth the read though.

Did you give much thought to the biting of his finger? You now have to explain how he doesn't get picked up for that straight away.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Unlikeable horrible characters

No fun to read

evebroughtanaxthistimeevebroughtanaxthistimeabout 8 years ago

If you don't finish this story, I'm going ...to...to...oh damnit...bite my toenails in public. Yes, that's what I'll do. And then scream at the passers-by. No words, just scream. And then kiss the arresting officer without having brushed my teeth. There. I know that your last sentence could technically be seen as the end by an intelligent person, but the aforesaid should answer you on my status. Get him out of trouble! Please?

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