All Comments on 'Nude Beach Fantasy Ch. 01'

it is short that is good or i would have stopped reading it because i don't like writing from this angle but i did give you 4* keep writing.

This is one of those times

Good luck with that. I think almost the samething when I'm at the beach, bikini bottoms have become backless. I haven't the courage to ask, while holding my own.... " Miss you look like you need some sun block wood you like a hand".

Please please, next summer I need a sunblock sprayer. And keep your hands to your self.

I loved it. I'm a guy that would love to make that fantasy come true. Putting it in the 2nd person just made it clear that its something you desire, not something that actually happened. I hope it actually happens for you!

Wow! I had no clue that guys do fantasize about this for real. I've always had this fantasy and just discovered that CFNM is a thing. I'd love to be the girl in this story! Great job and thanks!

Don't write stories in the second person.