by Ashson
I assume that you are writing this in several parts. I would suggest you write the story in it's entirety.
I'm OK with fantasy and farce, but please--a bit of reality would be nice. You have Candace groaning because "she couldn't break [the contract] and she knew it. It would ruin her."
Her goal is to be in films--not in the porno industry--so why should she give a damn when James tells her: "You'll never work in the industry" if you break the contract.
And sue her? Nonsense. They haven't paid her. Just walk away.
Interestingly enough in the early motion studies of the dawn of the moving picture circa 1900 nude actresses performed various tasks purportedly to demonstrate the workings of muscles and skeletal structures. How about that as a premise for a story like this? Of course a woman cannot contract away her right not to be raped, but there is a certain giddy silliness allowed in porn.
This is an amusing comedy about the signing of a female porn star. In a sense, the term female porn star is a redundancy since males in porn are props. The story line, undressing to demonstrate the golf swing as a prelude to intercourse with the golf pro, captures some of the giddy silliness of adult films.