All Comments on 'Nurses Night of Hell'

I haven't finished the story yet but will but just so you know Omeprazole is generic for Prilosec which no one would steal from a hospital as you can get it at the grocery store.

...if that's your only beef with the story, I'd say it was a pretty small one. Perhaps Loki isn't a pharmacist - he still writes a good and sexy yarn. Five from me, regardless of the minute detail error. Thanks, Loki - I hope there might be more to this story - you know how incorrigible these young nurses can be!

Your story had just the right amount of back story to make it interesting. Now it needs a follow up story. Good job.

I loved your story but I think you were quite fixed on looking at the story as Stevens; you should have tried looking at it more from the nurse's side

YAH... just like those hospital dramas has a doctor say "Intravenous Saline Solution stat!!" or "Give him A-S-A for his pain and inflammation" [*smirk* ASA=acetylsalicylic acid=aspirin; 'saline' =(table)salt]

The author doesn't want to get sued, or get Literotica sued, or get his story pulled by a threatened lawsuit by naming a brand/copyrighted/licensed/trademarked medication. That attitude is totally appropriate in our litigious society [USA].

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What would have been more interesting: that the nurses stole, and sold, BLOOD. After the punishment, branching stories could have gone into Mind Control, SciFi/Fantasy, NonConsent, BDSM, etc.

The story was written in, and also set in 1995

Hence Omeprazole being a much more expensive drug than it is now.....

Great story. How much is the video selling for? At least give us some pictures to enjoy