by Loki31uk
Great story. How much is the video selling for? At least give us some pictures to enjoy
The story was written in, and also set in 1995
Hence Omeprazole being a much more expensive drug than it is now.....
YAH... just like those hospital dramas has a doctor say "Intravenous Saline Solution stat!!" or "Give him A-S-A for his pain and inflammation" [*smirk* ASA=acetylsalicylic acid=aspirin; 'saline' =(table)salt]
The author doesn't want to get sued, or get Literotica sued, or get his story pulled by a threatened lawsuit by naming a brand/copyrighted/licensed/trademarked medication. That attitude is totally appropriate in our litigious society [USA].
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What would have been more interesting: that the nurses stole, and sold, BLOOD. After the punishment, branching stories could have gone into Mind Control, SciFi/Fantasy, NonConsent, BDSM, etc.
I loved your story but I think you were quite fixed on looking at the story as Stevens; you should have tried looking at it more from the nurse's side
Your story had just the right amount of back story to make it interesting. Now it needs a follow up story. Good job.
...if that's your only beef with the story, I'd say it was a pretty small one. Perhaps Loki isn't a pharmacist - he still writes a good and sexy yarn. Five from me, regardless of the minute detail error. Thanks, Loki - I hope there might be more to this story - you know how incorrigible these young nurses can be!
I haven't finished the story yet but will but just so you know Omeprazole is generic for Prilosec which no one would steal from a hospital as you can get it at the grocery store.