All Comments on 'O Christmas Ball, O Christmas Ball'

by BlueFish11

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JADED_ONE1969JADED_ONE1969over 15 years ago
Well that was interesting.

I liked it a little strange but good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
STRANGE!!!!!!

This, indeed, was a very strange story. Didn't exactly explain what happened and there was nothing to really base a guess upon. Story needs some basis in fact and could use some greater explanation.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
not bad

inventive and mysterious. Not entirely successful in its conclusion.

BigFtHunterBigFtHunterover 15 years ago
Good until the end

I thoroughly enjoyed the story until the punch line was delivered. I just couldn't see this happening. Great writing up until that point.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Humerous

I wished there wasa little more humour in the loving wives section. Keepit up.

KlausTheMausKlausTheMausover 15 years ago
Dear Strange!!!!!!

If you seriously need "more explanation" and "some basis in fact", you have absolutely no imagination at all. Read another porn story instead. Thanks, BlueFish, for a great story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Heheheheh HO!

VERY inventive. Leave the reader imagining what happened - let the mind wander. One can only imagine where that Xmas ball ended up! ;) Hummm, did muscular contractions break the delicate glass????

Keep up the interesting prose...

Oh, and nevermind the nay-sayers who lack imagination.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
I did get what the emergency Christmas

Ball was but was the last Ben-Wa balls? that I was not really sure about.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
The next trip to Emergency

Will be the husband after the wife puts the ben wa balls up his ass.

sacksackover 15 years ago
There must be something wrong with me.....

I actually think I understood the ending! Thanks Blue, for sharing this gem!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 15 years ago
String of large anal beads, ben wa balls, who care

it was a great read. Only one problem wives should not lie to their husbands, or promise things they cant deliver, she needs to beat the crap out of him, but we will wait until he is asleep of course.

AnonymousAnonymousover 6 years ago
Christmas

The vagina isn't a good place for a Christmas tree bauble they are often made of very thin and delicate glass and are easily broken. A good job she was encouraged to stay still, the ER staff are used retrieving foreign objects from various orifices, it would have been very painful if it had broken, the Dr would just stretch vagina and it would roll out

.A very amusing Christmas story.

5 stars.

26thNC26thNCalmost 6 years ago
Way back

An unusual, but interesting story from the LW vault. Lot of good writing through the years available for us to find.

26thNC26thNCalmost 5 years ago
Not what

Not what I was expecting at all. A good little story.

SarahwithloveSarahwithlovealmost 2 years ago

Oh my god, that is some fragile glass in there. Lol, and yet it is still funny. Nice change of pace.

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