All Comments on 'Obedience Program'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Comment on story "Obedience Program".

I absolutely loved this story. It had me in thrall from start to finish. I imagined that I was the male in this story. I love the strap. What wonderful description. I was so caught up in the story that my mind was not reading it as a story but as reality being played out. Is not that the essence of what writing should be ?

StrapmewhenStrapmewhenover 8 years ago
Response to story "Obedience Program".

I loved this story. The setting was great. The parts of the story I particularly liked are and I quote:- "Leather meets flesh with a thunderous clap". "Be tamed and rewarded". and "fearing that I would disappoint her again". I can personally identify with all of these.

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