All Comments on 'Of Daisy Dukes and Daring Rescues'

by SassyGal84

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Wow!

I didn't know who April Scott was before finding your story, but I'm a big fan of hers now!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Just wow!!

You should right a follow on to this story

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

great story please write a follow up story.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago

More please.

SassyGal84SassyGal84about 8 years agoAuthor
Hadn't really thought about a sequel

I hadn't really thought about a sequel, and the real world has been demanding last couple of weeks, plus I already have two series to work on. But I'll let it percolate in the attic of my subconscious and see what comes out!

ResidentWeavilResidentWeavilabout 8 years ago
Insanely improbable but fun

This was a fun story. Steve was a bit underdeveloped for a main character but he wasn't flat or too stereotyped.

There was a little problem with the paragraph describing the new Manhattan home. He mentions that he will spend his senior year in a new high school and then says that his prestigous school will prepare him high school. Should probably have said college. But that was minor. Pun intended.

Thanks for a fun read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago

If only! :)

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