by stubborn_dreamer
I swear to God if this story turns out to be a Netorare story (one where the heroine is taken, either forcibly or by her own will, away from the main love interest, who is forced to watch as she is taken by another man), I'm going to be so upset.
Please let Zyra's first time be with Rell. If Hanto rapes her, I hope the author at least sees fit to have him die by her hand, his last thought one of regret, the last expression to grace his face one of despair.
Im so happy you have continued to write this story. I had given up hope for awhile. Then I check and theres a chapter 13 lol.. I have some catching up to do. I cant wait. !!!!!
u r doing a wonderful job. pls keep going. this can easily be a 5 star novella!
Thanks MzMagicBeauty! Your words really meant a lot. I was really hesitating on putting out the next chapter because of the reception I got on this one. Hopefully as the storyline progresses, the ratings will rise^^
Its like a hidden treasure in Literotica land.. everyone should read it.