All Comments on 'Oh My God Ch. 06'

from the sound of it they are not together anymore. everything at the end was said in the past tense.

Redlion, where did you get that? Most stories are written in the past tense; very few are written in the present tense. Stories are retellings - emphasis on the re-. The idea is that these events already happened and it is a retelling. These things did happen in the 'past' but that does not suggest that they're not together now.

Only thing I dislike about the story is the use of a dog collar. No problem with a collar with significance, but a dog collar and a leash is demeaning. If a submissive is to be collared it should be an attractive collar that is special to her.

I agree with Horseman.

A cheap nasty mass produced dog collar as a symbol of the value he places on her.

It's a bit like giving your girlfriend a cheap plastic ring (probably one with a water squirter on it) as an engagement ring.

No commitment there.

No romance there.

No sense of value there.