All Comments on 'Ok I'll do It, Again Pt. 02'

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Damn - you give anonymous a bad name. Admittedly the story was weak, and weird script style of writing dialog stinks, but Reagan? The writer is from Australia for christ's sake. Get a clue.

others I thought the final paragraphs were intriguing and certainly unexpected, good twist. Dumb Sam who thinks with his cock so he will be out soon?!

JJ

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dumb cuck shit.

Even worst than part 1...And that was a difficult task to achieve...1*

Horrific writing, garbage story........

They're turning her into a prostitute...

Who the hell wants to swap partners on their honeymoon, they have hardly got to know one another in married life. I'm certain the marriage wont last.

Weeeeeeeeeeelllllllllllllllllll a

HooHooDilly and a Cha Cha Cha Cha Cha!

I have a headache from trying to decipher whet the hell was being said.

Do you understand the need for correct punctuation and grammar?