All Comments on 'Okay... Ch. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
What an asinine story.

If you ask someone to do it they just will? And the only thing he can think of doing is raping three women? Do you have even the slightest fucking idea what you doing or are you just a retard?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Keep at it.

Not bad at all. Has some real potential, but he does have a point, there are so many directions to take this, eventually the bland do what I say euphoria will wear off. Liking it so far though.

pois1pois1over 10 years ago

Retarded, misogynist, great :D

Chi_guy82Chi_guy82over 10 years ago
Awesome

Loved it, especially the forced public exhibitionism part. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Awesome

Can't wait for the next part!

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
awesome

Great stuff man, loved the way he made her by him cofee with a load on her face. Keep it going

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

When might we get new chapters.

surferchick88surferchick88almost 10 years ago
wow

How dare you are... really amazing how much flinthy thoughts could be in a story... I love it

doorknob22doorknob22about 9 years ago
Very nice

Filthy, slightly over the top but still lots of fun. Thanks!

Crossfit5Crossfit5over 2 years ago

Any chance you'd consider writing the story of "blonde girl's date?" I can just imagine some horrible co-worker or just some jerk wanna-be she'd treated poorly in the past and all his friends taking their turns. Lol.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Fantastic story. Our boy surely knows how to give women what they really crave. It's good to see him not pussyfooting around and putting the screws to these lovelies. Although its probably only a drop in the bucket to the horseshit the ladies have put plenty of fellas through.

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Thank you for the warm welcome back. I've been working on more serious projects, but it feels good to be on this side again.

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