All Comments on 'Older Neighbors Ch. 05'

be in fetish category.

Just horrible. Badly conceived, terrible delivery. Is he really that stupid?

Nobody own a gun under the rock you crawled out of.

That score is enough to make me pass this one by. Loving wives, like normal, isn't faring to well these days. Only one story made it over 4 stars There are very few writers that earn that kind of score these days in this category. What's that tell you loving wives writers? You're not writing erotic stories that the majority of readers prefer.ML

Score of 1.9 is too much...This part 5 is realy no good...The other 4 parts I could accepted, but this one is bad....Return Otto you are forgiven...

Soon husband will being clean-up on all who cum

Tell you why dont you triple that for the next chapter Hey doc! There is nothing erotic about this See you in 2020

You could use some work with grammar and flow, but you've definitely got a sense for the erotic. I read the first of your stories when it came out, but forgot the title and couldn't find it again. It's been years but I'm really glad to see you've continued writing. And I hope you keep it up.

Great theme, structure, and thought process but grammar and sense of letting us readers 'see' and 'feel' what is happening is not always there....

The idea of standing up and feeling inferior to gnomish, dominant, controlling old men like the therapist is so powerful and hot. Dr. Yes describes these feelings perfectly. His stories are magnificent. So impressed by the stories about Cathy and these confident old men.

As noted, there are many loving wives stories, some are wide but shallow. Readers get jaded or bored more easily. Some jerks even get impatient that someone else has a life and does not sit down daily to write for their pleasure.

Older Neighbors is a story that is narrow, specific and deep. The quite realistic passages in this Chapter 5 transition from Otto to Doctor Don get into why Cathie and chris are the way they are as a married couple. Please, doctor yes, more! Greg

keep it coming

Thanks for the series so far, have known women exactly like this ! They are very sub and just can't say no to cock ! There is something so hot about a woman being such a slut. I can totally understand the husband enjoying her exploits.

I'd love to read how the therapist takes the wife for extended periods of time to measure the extent of her survitude.

You can't finish the story just like this

I agree with pip46 that you have to add to this excellent story. You write well and all your stories are enjoyable. More please.

Your stories lack dialogues which is a mandatory for a good story. Secondly, your stories are unlikely to be happening in real world. Both the main characters are so dumb that they don't know what to do. Just two push overs.

Either better your plots or stop writing and wasting time of the readers.

your story is pure shit you are a ass hole fore writing shit like this the husband is fucked up beyond help the wife is a whore and you fore writing this shit suck the husband should kick the Otto and Helga asses for them ........................................

Great story! Well done. So many negative comments from readers? Attention seeking morons! Keep up the good work!

just go take a ZyclonB shower. Makes this world a tiny little bit cleaner and healthier.

Do it. Just do it. Yes you can. You Must. Do it!

I wish I had a wife like her.

Great story, would just benefit from a bit more detail during the sex scenes particularly, extending them a bit.

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Sure take the slut and take your glock and end this shit.

Oh Please, why did you not continue, I need to kneel at the Doctors feet and taste his superior cock before it enters my wife. I love this series and being a beta I need men like these to make my wife full. 4yourpleasureiam

Thankfully no more of this shit

It was a fun, sexy story up to the "Therapist's" entering the "treatment

The words, "Step aside, Butch." come to mind.

Loved the story, written well. I would of loved to see the part of the series continue with Helga bringing her friends over and offering Cathies services to their husbands while Cathie is serving the friends coffee in a tiny maid outfit.