All Comments on 'On Assignment'

Wow.

What a great way to start!

Loved it, and can't wait for the next installment.

Too many authors either rush into an elaborate story or jump into complex sexual situations. You did a nice job of keeping it simple without being dull. Looking forward to more.

Mmmmm, I'd like to meet mark...and Zoe...hot!

Nicely done, though more details of Mark jerking off would have been welcome. Zoe's fondling was perfect. Keep up the good work!