All Comments on 'On Assignment'

by citizen1828

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
More please!

Nicely done, though more details of Mark jerking off would have been welcome. Zoe's fondling was perfect. Keep up the good work!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
😏

Mmmmm, I'd like to meet mark...and Zoe...hot!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
Good first contribution

Too many authors either rush into an elaborate story or jump into complex sexual situations. You did a nice job of keeping it simple without being dull. Looking forward to more.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
First submission - of many we hope.

Wow.

What a great way to start!

Loved it, and can't wait for the next installment.

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