All Comments on 'On Call'

Author - the plot holes are obvious and hopefully this was a "quick write" because from a character development/informational POV - it sucks! Better luck next time.

Oh BOY! Another male bashing, ball busting, women writer out to neuter some poor schlub, then wonders why nobody likes her stories.

Stupid! Another wimp story.

Why would this turn a guy on, your a sick little bitch, tommie.

Where is that fetish section when you need it?

You are a prude to your husband but seem disappointed by the lack of sex wirh him yet you willingly go off to be a slut for someone you don't even know.. Hope the hubby finds out and takes the kids. At least he is a great father. You are certainly less than any kind of wife. Not one of my favorites. Tim

Looking at the comments I have to wonder about people's ability to separate fact and fiction, fantasy from reality. And wasn't there something about different strokes???

I thought it was a very hot story with a different angle on the slut wife genre. And it was posted, in fact, in the "loving wives" (that is, slut wife) section.

Hey, if you see yourself in the passive husband and it pisses you off, go change yourself.

Great story, thanks for sharing.

and a fun read. Keep writing.

Minor detail, you need to know the number to page someone.

Just plain stupid.

Who is really the slut here Tom? I think we all know what you like to do behind your bathroom door with that big wide black belt...

hot story, well written. i gave it five stars (don't often do that).

Getting her holes filled while pretending her cuck husband isn't aware. I hate cheaters.

Something new. Whore on call.