All Comments on 'On Her Knees She Wept'

remind me of the book sleeping beauty by anne rice

I thought the story was very sensual. The element of control, complete domination and submission is very erotic. Pain and pleasure do have an intense sensory effect during a sexual encounter, I loved the story.

Don't worry about the anonymous cowards. Keep Writing. Try to use an editor for those few mistakes and don't type with one hand.

I think you capturedthe essence of how a D/S relationship can be. Good Job!