All Comments on 'On the Beach Ch. 16'

Kathi,

Been enjoying your series, On The Beach Ch. 16, keep going!

bobkit

your story has drawn me in. what will become of these two?

i enjoy it very much, but its about time to bring this to a close in the next couple of chapters.

You have built it up and oyu need to find a way to go further as hinted with Murphy and then figure out hoe they will continue or end it.

Nice job

I don't get the negative comments, I think you're doing a terrific job with this story. I can see this going on for quite a while.

I have not come back to look for new chapters of a story in a very long time. Your writing is great and so different for the usual Literotica stories. I'm right there with your character ... and I'm hard most of the times. Please introduce some nylon and I'll be in heaven!

A big fan