All Comments on 'On Top of a Mountain'

Completely wooden. No feeling at all.

It's a nice story from a prolific writer who is back with is after a long hiatus.

you are very imaginative and your mind is just like mine was until I turned 60!

Quite a cute tale. Nicely detailed but some element keeps it just short of believeable.

A bit more "getting to know you" might help.

with the first poster.

Wooden. Dead.

Not bad for a short story, seemed like the storyline could have been longer. 4/5