by Jena121
Not bad for a short story, seemed like the storyline could have been longer. 4/5
Quite a cute tale. Nicely detailed but some element keeps it just short of believeable.
A bit more "getting to know you" might help.
you are very imaginative and your mind is just like mine was until I turned 60!
It's a nice story from a prolific writer who is back with is after a long hiatus.