All Comments on 'Once in a Lifetime Between Friends'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Go0d Story

Erotic, but too brief. It would have helped to fill in more details, eg. thoughts, reactions, feelings, ore sexual details. Your sequel could have been part of this story.

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