by ForkedBeard
So who is it Mike or Lou , we seem to have two different men involved here?
This story is almost exactly like one earlier this week...werid
go to the police and not fear any repercussions because it turns out it was some guy named Lou that was held against his will.
there is not a single bit of noncon here and the reluc is a joke because he's living the dream and fulfilling all his bi fantasies withojt doing anything gay. give it a rest.
How about Tom, Dick and Harry? Different kind of story made unreadable. Totally fucked up. Get an editor or proofreader.
Forgetting your main character's name is simply stupid.
Hot stuff! Wouldn't mind being involved in something like this with my wife and 5 of her friends. Weekends would certainly be something to look forward to,as long as the girls didn't decide they wanted to see some man on man action.
Liked this story!
The story was hot, very erotic. The name switch was weird but excuseable. I didn't like the leather mask thing, it made it less personal and it made the blackmail with pictures a little less believable. The best part was Mike/Lou being completely at thd mercy of this group of women. The worst was the idea that men can't urinate with an erection, they can and do just about every morning.
Liked it a lot but didn't love it
in this so - called marriage . It will break soon .
Call her - and their --bluff .
Walk out .
When a man realizes his life is over, there isn't much to live for. Murder suicide comes to mind. Mike/Lou? What's in a name? This revenge will blow up eventually. 1*
So what do you have two husbands? Sorry but this is still rape. One star because of rape.
He's a lucky guy, but it can be tricky to follow,as the guy's name switches from Mike to Lou and back within the story and at times the women's names get mixed up. Overall it's a good story and I wish I was a lucky as Mike/Lou...