All Comments on 'Once Too Often!'

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tazz317tazz317over 10 years ago
A LESSON PLAYED

should be a lesson learned,, TK U MLJ LV NV

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Who is it?

So who is it Mike or Lou , we seem to have two different men involved here?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
right you changed name in middle of story

This story is almost exactly like one earlier this week...werid

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mike should.....

go to the police and not fear any repercussions because it turns out it was some guy named Lou that was held against his will.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Mike, Lou & ......

..I was waiting for Og to show up

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
take it to BDSM

there is not a single bit of noncon here and the reluc is a joke because he's living the dream and fulfilling all his bi fantasies withojt doing anything gay. give it a rest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Agreed: Mike, Lou??

How about Tom, Dick and Harry? Different kind of story made unreadable. Totally fucked up. Get an editor or proofreader.

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
Have you read this?

Forgetting your main character's name is simply stupid.

GoodhueGoodhueover 8 years ago
Mike,Lou,Who Cares?!!!

Hot stuff! Wouldn't mind being involved in something like this with my wife and 5 of her friends. Weekends would certainly be something to look forward to,as long as the girls didn't decide they wanted to see some man on man action.

Liked this story!

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
good, but . . . .

The story was hot, very erotic. The name switch was weird but excuseable. I didn't like the leather mask thing, it made it less personal and it made the blackmail with pictures a little less believable. The best part was Mike/Lou being completely at thd mercy of this group of women. The worst was the idea that men can't urinate with an erection, they can and do just about every morning.

Liked it a lot but didn't love it

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Too many people .....

in this so - called marriage . It will break soon .

Call her - and their --bluff .

Walk out .

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
"If My Life Is Over"

When a man realizes his life is over, there isn't much to live for. Murder suicide comes to mind. Mike/Lou? What's in a name? This revenge will blow up eventually. 1*

trandall9991trandall9991almost 6 years ago
You started with Mike and changed to Lou

So what do you have two husbands? Sorry but this is still rape. One star because of rape.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Lucky Guy

He's a lucky guy, but it can be tricky to follow,as the guy's name switches from Mike to Lou and back within the story and at times the women's names get mixed up. Overall it's a good story and I wish I was a lucky as Mike/Lou...

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