All Comments on 'One and the Other Ch. 02'

That is some fucked up shit your smoking.

Go crawl back under the rock you crawl out from under.

I will check often!

Is polluted with swill that drips from your word processor .it must be the DOPE.

Got to wonder about the emotional and mental stability of a person who writes this kind of crap.

huecuck, Random, poopchoot, the ped0 all dribbling in their panties on this bonus level of cuckoldry. enough implied humiliation to be worthy of read, spank, rant.

with the same outcome. TK U MLJ LV NV

This is quite possibly the worst piece of crap I have read in a long time. 1. He's a cheater. It's not sexy and as the "burn the bitch" crowd would say, he deserves some untreatable STD so that he can just rot off and die. 2. The "Behind every Wife is a lesbian slut in hiding" is just dumb.

You have a finely honed talent. The story read in a very natural manner that had me reading every word as quickly as I could. Please keep these stories coming.

Real bad this. "1*" bad.

Just no improvement. Didn’t like chapter one, didn’t like this one either.

So…he's got two sluts in his life.

One always reads a second or subsequent chapter hoping the author is learning and it will get better. Sometimes it gets worse. Too bad