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Not romance, belongs in erotic couplings

Not romance is right and not much eroticism either. Needs work, lots of work on several levels. Don't mean to be unkind but we call 'um as we see 'um. But if the passion calls, keep writing. Writing is a craft as the experts say. Practice doesn't make perfect, though it does make better. Hang in there.

It is not romance. It has the makings of a good stroke story, but you just need to finish it !!!