One in Ten Ch. 06

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They will know it is me," she smiled, "so I will take my little brother's words of advice and I, too, shall have the final word."

She pulled out her police issue sidearm, put it at the crux of her jaw and throat the pulled the trigger. The camcorder dropped, her body flipped back and then she was still for a moment.

She had been kneeling, so that when she fell back dead, her forelegs were pinned under her. Her right foot kicking slightly was sort of a shock.

"Oh my God," I gasped. I felt like weeping.

"That - that kicking - it happens occasionally," Angel whispered in disbelief. That was not what I was referring to.

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WargamerWargamerabout 1 year ago

The world unravels before their eyes

5/5

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

My gosh. I posted after the first chapter and feel the need to post again. A long time since this was written, but that’s the power of the recorded written word? This is simply amazing. I can’t stop for a piss it’s so good. An analogy for any brow beaten section of any socket anywhere, I really believe that this (over the top) representation of oppression has some really interesting angles we could all learn from. What a talented author!!

FinalStandFinalStandalmost 4 years agoAuthor
Kritta

Thank you. I really worked hard on the build up to that scene as well as the scene itself.

James aka FinalStand

KrittaKrittaalmost 4 years ago
Kuiko...

I usually scroll past sex scenes, even here on Lit, but the kuiko scene we really hot after the extensive character setup. Nicely done!

Grimjack01Grimjack01over 4 years ago

This story is an example of excellent writing on an interesting involving story line, 5 stars.

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