All Comments on 'One Little World Ch. 02'

by The_Fractal_King

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
This was what BDSM should be about.

I am surprised no one commented. You are doing a superb job and are a fine storyteller. Thanks for the entertainment.

violetflowervioletflowerabout 16 years ago
Excellent

Great story. Excellent slow build. I cannot wait to read more!

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
GOOD

Im excited to read more its getting better...keep writing!!

xsmurfx3xxsmurfx3xabout 14 years ago
5/5

O,,O <333 a story with love is good than utter sex every now in then, her nerousness is cute but sometimes she says things that are un needed

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