All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 04'

by S1lverF0x

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AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
keep writing please

have sat and read your stories. Wow i love it!....could easily slip my fingers between my thighs....but my Master wouldn't approve...so i'd best be a good slut!

But look forwards to the next part

S1lverF0xS1lverF0xover 13 years agoAuthor

Thanks

I really love the feedback - and you have my permission to do whatever you need to do. That's why I wrote the story

regards

S1lverF0x

DryhillDryhillalmost 13 years ago
EXCELLENT

This story is really turning out to be well worth reading. Not only is there plenty of action now, but the writing style and characterization is also good. What more could one wish for ....... oh yes to read the next chapter,

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