All Comments on 'One Long Dream Ch. 08'

I think he is taking it to far to fast and though she did ask for all this I still think he should show her a little more caring.

Thanks so much for your comment. You're probably right, they may need a short break to recuperate before their last two adventures, which might take some time to write. Please encourage your friends to comment as well.

Great story/series, Look forward to continuation.

Thank you S1lverFox for a very enjoyable eight chapters. Your story has been well told with very good characterizations and plenty of detail about locations, people and action. i look forward to reading more about all these people in the near future.

She was pierced without her consent, in fact forced to do it.,

The charade contract means fuck all in Australian law. Based on my reading to date, If the ex wants to screw him over after the remarriage she would get him no trouble.

Adam would serve time for assault,rape and grievous bodily harm. Mike would serve time for assault and rape, and Tamara charged with sexual assault.

Wayne and his Missus both would be charged with assault, grievous a

bodily harm, Wayne with rape and sexual assault, he too would serve a lengthy sentence..

The reality of Australian law makes this story a parody.

Read it to see how far the nonsense would go.Too far.

That’s it for me

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