All Comments on 'One Man's Therapy'

First this wasn't incest, maybe first time or erotic encounter but not incest. Second this story needs better editing. Present tense verbs make the story choppy in the flow of reading. Also, you rushed through the erotic parts, heck half way through the anal sex, I realized that it was anal and not just vaginal sex going doggy style.

Overall this story was a waste of time, but I figured I would give criticism where it due.

I then, I then, I then, I then, I then.

Bad form.

Bad story.

Very boring & badly written.

I really enjoyed this story! Could use some tweaking (i.e. Some editing & maybe the father imagining the girl is his daughter to make it fit better in to the incest category). Otherwise, great concept!

Last line gained a chuckle. Wrong category, but oh well. Nice job.

Present tense this, wrong category that. What ever, you need polish, and maybe you have not yet developed the story into the incest genre. There is plenty of room to grow for both. Do not worry about the negative aspects of the comments, take the criticism's in a positive light and work from there. I liked the story very much, I was too involved in it to nit pick. Just keep at it and remember, "you can't please everyone, so please yourself."