by TxRad
Very hot, nice build up, rich description.
Enjoyed it a lot.
Tx, did this one melt your keybord? Good story and hot sex, what more can anyone ask for? I like it and thank you for another good one.
Great buildup to an even better ending.
I would have appreciated the use of spell and syntax checiing, especially moister to be moistuer and a couple of other choices.
Didn't loose the theme of the story though.
The story was well written and not just a bunch of genitalia clashing. I enjoyed that the main character was a "nice guy" and that the ending was both plausible and happy. Your description and appreciation for hose, garters, breasts and nipples was also a great addition to your story. Looking forward to more.
Chuck
Good description of the club and their encounter. I enjoyed it immensely. Thanks for sharing! [Gualterio]
I don't know the etiquette of one-night-stands, but I was certainly hoping they would stay together. Based on their verbal exchanges in the bar, this relationship was more than strictly sexual.
I really liked that romantic interlude and the last sentence uttered by the "dark haired lady". I would have been nice to read a name. One word came to mind, however. You wrote statue instead of status. Good read and writing. Cheers!
Us older guys can still impress the ladies. Enjoyed your story very much. It parallels one of my fantasies closely.