All Comments on 'One Pump Chump'

by Gaius8666

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
An epilogue perhaps?

You should write about what happened a year later.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 8 years ago
So many great stories!!

Each could have volumes of chapters! I hope you continue some of them. Thanks for all the great reading so far!!

spaceinvaderspaceinvaderover 7 years ago
amazing

Damn, now THAT was hot!

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
PLEASE

keep is going give stories of how u tease him over the next year,

please make it like 10 chapters and bring in the other dancers. as well as using a strap on with him.

Tank4228Tank4228over 3 years ago

More tease and denial with chastity !! Keep this story going pleaseeee

thomashwhitethomashwhite7 months ago

Disappointed because this was predictable. He was weak before they started. This wasn’t even a real challenge and the outcome was guaranteed. but he knew he didn’t have a choice because of the debt.

It’s too much like kicking a puppy to me. It was like blowing cocaine into an addicts face. Will they resist? Can they even resist?

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