All Comments on 'One Time Ch. 01'

Please join with the other authors in this category who have decided to delete all of the negative comments by the troll who posts all of these ridiculous comments on every Loving Wife story. Please help to make Literotica a great place once again.

In the description on this site it clearly states that Loving Wives is about women having extramarital sex, so you haters need to understand that. The author did a good job of telling a story and described it with enough detail to be quite entertaining. Thank you, please continue with the next story asap.

Love those women who give in to their urges with a little push. Clearly her character had some repressed fantasies and her husband did as well. Good job author.

And please delete all those hate filled comments from the troll.

Can't wait for ch 2 , to see how this develops

Thanks

Don't let the assholes get you down! Easy story to read and I hope you're working on part 2. Is this your fantasy regarding your wife and is she aware? Inquiring minds want to know.

I'd love to see my wife used by four black guys. Hubby should of ate and rimmed her Afterwards.

Nice

Awesome story dude!

I would love to have had four black guys use me like that

Oh my god I would be so hard watched by my wife fuck these guys. I came twice reading this.

On a spring break many years ago had a married young couple get drunk with a bunch of college guys and a couple of other girls. This guy had to see his wife getting repeatedly fucked all night and the next morning. I doubt that marriage lasted. She was pummeled in her ass pussy and mouth over and over again . He got some from the other two girls also but had a hard time the next morning sober watching her still get pounded

Keep up the great work!

During a vacay years ago we had been drinking all day. Later on we hit the hot tub. There were three young guys there and they had a big bottle of jaegermeister. They kept doing shots with us and eventually I passed out. I came to a while later and saw my wife bent over a nearby table getting pounded by one of the guys while she had the other two in her hands. I pretended to still be passed out and watched as they all fucked her over and over. After they were worn out she “woke” me helped me to our room. The next day she acted as if nothing had happened, but she did ask if we were going down to the hot tub later.....heheh

This story started with a lot of potential. I like the idea of the shy wife in the skimpy bikini. But it lost me at the arrival of the four black men. It went from the feasible to the tired cliche. The wife was either going to be raped or consentually gang banged that being her first extra martial activity. Either way a sensationalistic fantasy that really should be in the non consent section.

Deep down she loved it. He loved it and the four guys definitely loved it. So I give it 4 stars.

and would love to see my wife fucking other men regardless of race or dick size, if I witnessed her in that situation I would have been out the door with 911 already dialed. Watching my wife engaging in consensual sex is one thing, watching her get raped by four guys...no fucking way.

It may be your fantasy but put it in the non-concentual category where it belongs.

Having something unexpected like that happen would be unbelievable. I would love this to happen to my wife. She could use a little fun.

I enjoyed the story, especially Debbie having multiple orgasms while being filled with huge black dicks. I’m betting it’s gonna happen again.

You did a good job with this. I love being surprised in the hot tub by one or more big black men with nice cocks. Xoxoxoxoxoxoxo Annette

Love how all the non writers post BS, just love to bitch and judge over a STORY.

If you don’t like reading erotica for adults go read nursery rhymes. Ignore the trolls and keep writing what you want.

Great fun! Sorry for all the conflicted zealots who read this and take out their sexual confusion on you.

Sounds like stretched messy wife n bed

Shouldn't this story be in NonConsent/Rape?

This one was brutal - Debbie said "No" too many times. I'm happy hubby got his rocks off and assume Deb will move on to other situations. Bad as it was, I gave you 5 stars.

Love how she never said anything to her husband after the men were done using her. Would have been unable to move if I was watching my wife in that situation. So hot listening to her cum from them forcing her as they dominate her. She ended up used and worn out when they were done. I can imagine her thoughts as she was frozen in place as they tested her resistance and found out what she was really like.

That’s why she’s scared to be around men alone, she can’t stop them from getting what they want.

This is stupidly hot. I love these 'first time, pseudo non consent, getting out of hand' type of stories.

Another great story, I loved it!

Knowing myself like it do i would be concerned until i saw or heard her cum. Then I would watch, wanting to see her cum more. The more I heard her whining and complaining but still cumming as they did what they wanted the hotter it is for me.

I’d love hearing them talking about getting the slut to cum again and hearing her saying “ O God” as she arches her back and cums. Them taunting her about how she loves being held down as big black dicks ruin her and laughing as she cums for them. Love to see that.