All Comments on 'One Time Ch. 03'

Like the story. Hopefully there will be a part 4.

You're on a roll. Keep it up!!

Would’ve been a little better if hubby came in while she was coming with his dick up her ass and loving it. He wants his wife to be a pig for other cocks which is wierd but hot . Next he’ll have her in some seedy bar picking up black gang bangers and letting them use her. He doesn’t care if she is a pig . Most guys I know want to fuck a pig and have fun but never marry a know pig. She is obviously submissive and love the giant dick black or not . If she really didn’t want it to happen she could’ve squeezed his balls off . Guys also get off on being around some girl there fucking while in the preaseance of her and her husband/boyfriend. I can’t tell you how many guys have a woman at weddings sneak away from there hubby for a quickie or blow job. One wedding three guys fucked the tipsy maid of honor. She didn’t know any of them before the wedding weekend. The hubby two times argued with her over being two flirty that weekend. They said she was sucking one cock while the other fucked her bent over, rotating one ever pushed it up her ass and came . If all the bridal suites could tell stories something tells me there would be a lot more divorces

I liked the detail about the metal steps. Perfect addition for this unlikely plot to work. Keep going.

It didn’t take him long to cry out it’s in the wrong category (it’s not) or that it was horrible (it’s not)

Get the next chapter out soon so he can have a heart attack.

And our troll friend must have the record for tiny minds (and tiny peepees)

was very common in the LW section 15 years ago. Revenge gradually replaced hot wives and wife watching as the kink readers sought. These are simple fantasies and lots of readers enjoy them. The writing is pretty good although the plot is unbelievable, but they usually are. It's just a fantasy. There really is no need to have the men the wife strays with black. That may do something for the writer, but any big cock would do for this scenario, wouldn't it?

We need more stories like this.

Tricking he to have sex is so much more fun than tricking her to divorce her.

Certainly hope you continue with this series. May need to add another character to the story when you let her "branch out". Thanks for the story.

Is Annette in here?

Tiny Tim Bishope

Annie is over with Miguel. He's still telling your life story.

LW Troll

Please more of Ted and Debbie. How about have Gary go off on errands (with secret camera in bedroom recording) and have Ted come over and really give Debbie a few hours of solid fucking? Time to get her pregnant.

I love the creativity in your stories. I love the way you keep her on the edge of getting caught and keep her nervous about that. This is the best series I have read in a while. Thanks for sharing!

The vast majority of men with hot wives are not in the least homosexual or bisexual. The merely get off on their wives teasing, flirting, and sometimes having sex with others. It’s actually a smaller percentage of men with hot wives who have any bisexual tendencies. Less than half of what the total percentage of bisexuals in the general population is. Nice try asshole, buts it’s usually those who protest about gays and homosexuals that tend to be hiding their own desires to suck cock. And that makes you a two time cocksucker.

At least the man sharing husband wife has a wife. You only sit in the dark jerking that tiny micropenis to these stories and then post your filth complaining about fiction on a porn site. Utterly pathetic. Five stars to every author who deletes the hate.

Poor, confused girl. Yes, Ted must get her pregnant with twin girls, one black, one white. Four stars.

With a fixation on men who are nothing but bbdildos. No personality, no intelligence, just a dick.

I liked it. Debbie is not the smartest screw in the bin. I don't see how she doesn't see she is being played and led to the pipe and in this case its a big black pipe. She can't possibly think Gary is so stupid. All the things he thinks of are very creative but Debbie must have one very sore ass with that jamming of his cock to the hilt. With all the things I think are bad, I still give 5 stars, why because it got me hard and I started to stroke myself.