All Comments on 'One True Love Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
needs more

I enjoyed the idea of the fantasy but you needed to elaborate more on the love making it was entirely to short and unsatisfying.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
NICE!

Great start! Please write more SOON!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago
Please tell me you're joking.

BWAHAHAAA.

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