All Comments on 'One Week with Mr. Hansen Ch. 03'

Lily

Great story continues to get better - never would have thought it would go in this direction. Still wishing I were Mr Hansen

Keep up the great work

Gav

Like I said: Daddy likes young girls very much!

Keep them Cumming!

I enjoyed the unexpected turn that the story took. Keep us guessing and we'll definitely keep reading! Oh yeah, keep us cumming, too. ;)

Can't wait for him to spank Jenny & Claire kisses her red ass better

Menderman

Having Claire locked out in the back yard while naked is a nice touch by the author. Claire is so jealous. In Chapter 2, Claire tells Hansen that she really wants her pal Jenny to be dominated. Claire doesn't realize that her wish is coming true. This ensues when she is let in:

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>> Jenny was sitting on a chair that Mr. Hansen had taken from the kitchen, her eyes sparkling as she looked at me. I was sure she would have been smiling, but the scarf tied around her mouth was pulling at her cheeks. Her arms were tied behind the back of the chair with another scarf, which made her chest push forward. Her legs had been tied to two of the chair legs, spread just wide enough that I could see her bare, glistening pussy. She was so wet that it had already dripped on the chair, and her scent was already filling the room. <<

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Whew! The scent of a woman in heat. The image of that glistening pink flesh so emblematic of womanhood is appealing imagery.

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Then Claire notices that nipple chain.

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>> What shocked me most, however, was that her large pink nipples had shiny silver clamps on them. They were attached by a thin chain that was pulled almost taut from the size of her breasts, with another chain attached in the middle that was currently hanging against Jenny's flat stomach, obviously meant to be held by someone else . . . My pussy throbbed . . . "You said you wanted to see her dominated," Mr. Hansen whispered in my ear, sounding concerned. "Is this okay?" I finally turned to face him, smiling widely. "It's PERFECT, Daddy!" I exclaimed . . . <<

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One young woman wanting to dominate another, especially when they are friends, is an interesting twist.

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>> He came up behind me, his hard cock pressing against my ass. "You can do anything you want to her," he said, talking about Jenny as if she wasn't even there. "This little whore has no limits. She wants to be fucked, slapped, bitten, hit... if you really want, you can untie her and make her do anything you want." I inhaled sharply as he talked about my best friend like that. Jenny moaned softly, the sound so muffled by her gag that I almost didn't hear it. She was loving every second of this. <<

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Author Lily Ann is great at portraying the psychology of the situation.

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What follows is some hot girl-on-girl finger-fucking and peach-munching. Then Jenny’s attention is turned to Hansen in this hot passage:

>> His hand ended up on my ass as I licked the tip of his cock. Jenny looked at me as we both licked Mr. Hansen's cock, her eyes sparkling as she worked the underside and I licked the top. Eventually she moved her mouth to his balls, sucking them as I wrapped my lips around his cock and sucked him. Mr. Hansen's breathing was hard and his hand moved against my ass, slipping down between my legs so he could rub my slit. I didn't know exactly what Jenny was doing with his balls, but Mr. Hansen was loving it, and he couldn't keep himself from thrusting up into my mouth. I took his cock eagerly, hoping he was enjoying having two sets of teen lips on his hard cock. <<

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Lily Ann adds details to make the action more vivid, details like "bouncing tits" and "balls slapping".

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>> The only thing that took my eyes off Jenny's bouncing tits was the view of Mr. Hansen's cock sliding in and out of her pussy, his balls slapping against her, her pussy clenching around his cock. <<

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For what it's worth, I wasn't that thrilled with the passages about Tyson and Dan, though I understand the need to "flesh" out daily lives of the two young women. A little slutty perhaps. And a bit unrealistic. In my experience, a woman needs more time to recover after getting a good workout. Pussies, muscles, and ligaments get sore or strained. Claire and Jenny will be walking awkwardly.

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All in all, a great job by Lily Ann.

I love your stories, but at the end of Chapter 3 Claire is too slutty for my liking. I had the impression that she actually liked Mr Hansen. I hope that he punishes her rather than being upset with her having Tyson AND Dan's cum in her, but his character seems too sensitive for that.

I've been waiting for an update to this story for a while now and can't wait anymore, have mercy! I only have one critique, while I understand her curiosity about the young guy (sorry I forgot his name) I think Mr. Hansen should teach her a lesson about being a self-centered little slut. Just because he said it was okay to go out with the guy doesn't mean she should have fucked him, to add insult to injury she screws her friend's date because she wanted to get off. Sure she's a fun-loving tramp but isn't there a limit. Wait, I think I just answered my own question. Lol! Nevermind, new installment please!

God, your stories are amazing! They have driven me crazy multiple times, now!

Enough said. I thought Tyson immature, but this is advanced sex. Sharing is something I have never done, however I might make an exception here.

I will not fall in love with you . . . I will not fall in love with you . . . I will not fall in love with you . . . (I hope this is working. I am already in love, you see. I can't be hurt again, so . . . I will not fall in love with you.)

wish I could give it 6 stars

3 Stars as Tyson deserved better then that ,, 2 Sluts shit on Tyson and Jenny is a Slut also

Well done and well played. Some can handle sexual fun and some cannot. Loved it and 5 stars. Cheers