by Kurik
The thing I liked about this story is it feels very real - it feels like an honest narration of someone who has just done exactly what is described. If it is, it's a very nice story; if it isn't, it's an exceedingly persuasive fiction. Congratulations.
As usual, dear Kurik, you have outdone yourself. Your writing gets better and better. You've taken great care and quite a bit of precision with the details. And...it sizzles, too.