All Comments on 'Online Training of a Slave Ch. 01'

Any feedback and (specific) criticism is highly appreciated.

Posting all the correspondence verbatim became tedious after a while and I found myself skimming over it, reading only a sentence or a word here and there. After the tone is set with the early postings it would hold interest better if the letters were paraphrased and condensed. The concept is intriguing.

Thanks for being blunt, I guess you would consider the raw communication even more soporific then :)

I'll take another look at it and remove/condense redundant and mediocre parts.

I like the email format and really enjoyed the content. Made me wet.

I loved reading this and it has made me very wet