All Comments on 'Orc Masters Ch. 02'

Very intresting with a world of warcraft flavor that makes u feel FOR THE HORDE!!! lol

More please!

I absolutely loved the story. The Warcraft theme is amazing and erotic, I'd immediatly suggest you continue with more stories of the genre because you write it very well. My hopes are up to read another story soon. I also love the gangbang element you've presented so far. Sorry, I totally spaced on my account information so I'll have to announce it as anonymous.

if you make another line of wow stories make the main char. a mage. it would be interesting

I don't know what great power you have but these stories of elf and orcs are so sexy that my mind just reels about when i think about them. Please write more!

gay

definitely written by a gay

so dirty and sexy...the whole series...you should write some non human/ erotic horror stuff...

I liked it. A few things that I didn't like...but I loved it.

Love the story but... why do you keep changing from third person to first person narration? It feels quite jarring.

Rhetorical question.

No answer needed, or even wanted.

....how old were you when you wrote this story?

I keep being distracted by the words "Sex Oil."

I hear it as, *Thex oil.* And picture the speaker with a creepy Leer.

This may just be me.

Combined with the rest, I'd wager even odds on the author being either 14-16 or an adult virgin in the early 20s at the latest.

Definitely male.

Eh, whatever. If you ever come back to writing erotica, please work on your writing skills. The displayed skill level is borderline decent, but the borderline side of it is extremely distracting to me.