All Comments on 'OSO - Karen Ch. 09'

Glad you're back. Had been missing this. Another excellent chapter. My only suggestion would be to put I'm bumpers when you change location or characters. Hard to follow who is where and doing what when you jump around like you do. There is alot going on and there is not always a clear break when you change scenes. Other than that, outstanding story. I have no idea who is guilty or what will happen next.

Thanks.

I know it took me nearly one year to write this part.

I had a lot of work last summer, my chief just assigned me on three different projects: just work 8hours a day on each one :)

Then I broke my right arm after Xmas, but it's healed and the story continues on !