All Comments on 'Our Marriage'

Just because they are married does not make this a LW story. He's like this after 2 years of marriage? My prediction this relationship won't last long. No set up, no character development, nada zero zilch. Another cuck writer, just what this site needs. NOT!!

Also today a new baboon............

What this story isn't...This isn't for sure a LW story...can be put in any other category, never in LW...No marriage in it, no love in it, no respect in it, no self-esteem (nor even she has any self-esteem, because she was used as a whore and humiliated by the others...). This story has so many holes not clearly explained, but they lost importance before this sad and poor story...This is one of those that would never reach even 1*!!!

why not post it in fetish or BDSM ?

What marriage is this story about? Is there one? Well if there happens to be one, I would terminate it quickly. A blown up car with her and her lovers in it would do nicely.

you posted this story just to bug people and as a joke but really your worst then they are.

This does not belong in "Loving Wives"

and altho I am into BDSM this isn't to my taste

Written to elicit comments. Sad really.This has nothing to do with LW's but you know that Jamie dont you? Non erotic drivel.

Crawl back from whence you came

This story has nothing to do with a loving wife. Do you submit here in order to stir up humiliation for yourself? Can't you go get that somewhere where people enjoy abusing each other, or something? Its just a sad spectacle for you to troll for negative comments in order to feed some weird appetite you have. I don't dislike or reject you, I feel sorry for you.

Married 2 years, the bitch locks up his equipment and goes away weekends to fuck other guys. No matter how well written this could be, divorce the cunt leaving her zero but an STD.

Did notice the four tags associated with this Cuckold, Humiliation, Chastity and Creampie .Are these not fetishes? Why would you put this in LW's?Is the author a masochist? Must be.No vote .

then hit delete.

As others have noted this does not belong in the Loving Wives category. He hasn't been cuckolded out of love for him. She's in love with her own power trip. He's a convenient pet for her dominate & humiliate. Belongs in BDSM. No loving wife here.

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gave it a 5

No loving wife here. Just a manipulative bitch and an idiot (can't call him a man) that seems to have lost his pride and self respect. Since you didn't bother to explain WHY he was doing what he was doing and you posted this in the wrong place, I gave this mess a "1" ONLY because Lit doesn't allow negative scores - yet! Poorly conceived, badly written, with thoroughly unlikeable characters acting without rhyme or reason. Not a single original, clever or interesting part to it. Just plain no fun to read. UGH!

Now this story is at 1.5.........

No, if comments are to be deleted, which is questionable at best, delete comments from assholes who are so insecure they can't stand it when others dare to have an opinion that's different from theirs. The comments must have hit close to home and been a real reflection on this bozo to elicit such a response.

This is not Loving Wives. It is Sexual Personality Disorder. If it's you, embrace it but get some integrity and own it and publish it in FETISH. At least you were open in the title and tags. But you folks keep trying to force your twist into mainstream acceptance and guess what... This is paraphilia and those who get off on the humiliation either giving or receiving (sadism or masochism) are sociopathic. Fine, be sociopaths just keep it in your own category or cesspool.

And please have nothing to do with children. If you have them or grandchildren get them help and stay out of their lives.

Unfortunately there is little that can be done for your sickness apart from heavy medication and confinement.

please put this in either BDSM or possibly fetish category if you must. But I think people would prefer you not ever again.

Poor rating of 1. No man would allow that shit. So bad I couldn't finish it.

Just sayin' what a lot of you are thinking.

allow us to give zero stars?

Pay no attention to bonnietaylor2. She's posting anonymous again, pretending to be anonymous, the very persons she pretends to hate. Her five star ratings are a joke. Just another psycho in the world of Literotica.

Exactly what I've been yearning for....please write more!

and to help offset the asshole annony's votes

To help offset that cunt bonnietaylor2, who wouldn't know good erotica if it bit her in the ass.

what sewer do these guys crawl out of? the same one bonnietaylor did?

This story has one great virtue. It is short.

Just wanted to say thank you for all the response and comments, yes even those oh so thoughtful anon comments. My view is if you take the time to read it and leave a comment I must be doing something right. Glad you all enjoyed the story I have more coming.

Jamie

For a straight guy looking for a little something erotic, this is like falling in the sewer.

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At least you were kind enough to tell us up front about the wife's feelings for hubby. I can't understand treating anybody you once loved like that so I quit at that point. I intended not to vote, then carelessly hit one star. Sorry!

I'd comment but it's so bad it doesn't deserve any.

Loving wife? Where was she? Maybe in another story...Not in this one...1*

Why do you bother writing this sad crap ?

must be a psychopath, and must kill people!

I couldn't think of a better word, awful isn't bad enough. Anyone that could even dream of this stuff needs to be put down.

First off - you have GOT to know this belongs in fetish or BDSM. Putting it the loving wives section is just the author trolling the readers. And how stupid can one woman be? Why would he do anything she asks? She obviously has no love or respect for him. She's risking both of their lives by her actions. No one, man or woman, is THAT stupid. And she's going to show him a video of her actions? I think he takes the video from her goes to an attorney and starts the divorce. Then I think he makes copies of the video and sends them to all her family and friends. Once he identifies the men involved he makes sure all their wives, girlfriends and families get a copy. And the funniest part of this garbage? Her assumption that he hasn't been beating off all weekend while she was gone. Hysterically funny! Just a god awful excuse for a story.

It was bad even for fiction. And it begs the question - "What kind of sick individual even writes this garbage down"? You think demeaning and degrading another human being is funny or entertaining at any level? That's just sick.

I would probably kill myself if I had to go through that. I like how she says she loved him but I cant understand how that's possible

The point of the story is that my life could be worse - I could be this pathetic worm.

I would feel genuinely sorry for anyone who finds this enjoyable to read.

Nothing to like about it.

If you can catch grief from the usually nice and supportive Carolina Dreamer, then this must really be trash. I'll skip it, thanks.

Just too idiotic, moronic and just plain sick. Not sure any human could be so weak and stupid or have an imagination so twisted to dream this one up. Just awful

OMG this doesn't even live up to sick expectations I now know that there is not a category low enough for this to go in.

Please come back and finish this masterpiece PLEASE!!!!

I really need to see just how nasty the divorce was in their marriage. Talk about a dumpster fire to give a judge.

FINISH IT!!!!

There is one word that best describe my assessment of your pathetic submission; Shite!!! Yet another wonderful addition to the cuck/slut wife sub-genre.