by MisterNatural
Good read . . . the pace was fine and your descriptions of the scenes were clear and easy to imagine.
I'll look up your previous stories and any new submittals in the future,
Really nice coming of age story with likable characters and gentle respectful treatment of average looking people with all the insecurities we have.
No ropes, chains or handcuffs. Just an older woman leading a boy into adulthood. Great work. It was tender in it's way and the final outcome also had a sweetness to it. Well done.
Sweet tender and loving.