by MisterNatural
Sweet tender and loving.
No ropes, chains or handcuffs. Just an older woman leading a boy into adulthood. Great work. It was tender in it's way and the final outcome also had a sweetness to it. Well done.
Really nice coming of age story with likable characters and gentle respectful treatment of average looking people with all the insecurities we have.
Good read . . . the pace was fine and your descriptions of the scenes were clear and easy to imagine.
I'll look up your previous stories and any new submittals in the future,