All Comments on 'Our Song Ch. 04: Lisa'

But I have to ask. What is a 'noddy smile'?

Sorry for the typo

Brilliant, I loved the set up...A tale well told... So, where to from here?

I really like your stories but you should really consider getting an editor. I America we go to College, not collage. Also we act Naughty, not noddy.

One corner of my soul is anchored in Pittsburg! You are certainly spoiled for choice for potential hospitals in your story.