All Comments on 'Our Song Ch. 04: Lisa'

One corner of my soul is anchored in Pittsburg! You are certainly spoiled for choice for potential hospitals in your story.

I really like your stories but you should really consider getting an editor. I America we go to College, not collage. Also we act Naughty, not noddy.

Brilliant, I loved the set up...A tale well told... So, where to from here?

Sorry for the typo

But I have to ask. What is a 'noddy smile'?