All Comments on 'Our Trip to Prague'

We need more

Which of them is going to be "forced" to suck and fuck the security guard first

The concept is great, and the story is interesting, but you don't know how to write effectively... the grammar and sentence structure is so choppy that it's hard to get into the story. The reader can tell what you are trying to say, but your words fail to bring us there... we have to bring ourselves after deciphering your clumsy sentences. Many areas could be so much better with more details, but again you fail to deliver. Still, writing tends to get better the more you do it, so I recommend you take a writing class and keep trying.