All Comments on 'Out of Paper Ch. 01'

I really enjoyed your story. You took it nice and easy and made it work. I liked it that you limited yourself to the one episode. I did read the sequel and it's fine, but doesn't have the impact of the first part. I too am turned on by pee, mostly by watching and listening to other women pee. I guess what I liked was seeing you create two people who seemed real and who obvious enjoy pee-related activity.

Got me very excited.

Wonderful story, well developed, but I wish she had gone for a poop, that would have been so much more erotic.