All Comments on 'Over the Rainbow Ch. 02'

by Tara Cox

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bearsladybearsladyover 9 years ago

This story is perfect. The characters, Tara especially. You have caught the nervous questioning of who she is and discovering what she wants/needs. The fear of breaking a lifetime of adhering to societal mores. Plus you are pairing her with the type of Dom she is needing.

The buildup of sexual tension was incredibly good. As was the 'release' of the tension. ;-) Can't wait for the next step in her story

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